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Misery Heart

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: November 26, 2010 at 11:34 am
Entry Type: Poem, T (13+)
Category: Horror | Dark | Gothic
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments 115 views
Misery Heart 
The heart is been in pain

It is been heart broken

It is crying for the pain and misery

It has been puncture with a staple gun

16X16 staples pierced

It has been gasping for air in the lungs

But the heart was inside of the bloodstream

It weeps and cries out for help

But a poet came by free the staple shackles


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paSSionsburn
November 26, 2010

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cool and gritty!
TS..I absolutely love the edge to this one!! you rock dude!! keep writing my friend, cc
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TaylorSwiftFan22
November 26, 2010

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are the first three lines supposed to be Is or Has? this was a good one, although i'm not sure about the category horror! great job keep it up!
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