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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: November 23, 2010 at 08:58 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Collaborations | Collaborations | Collaborations
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 7 users with 8 comments and 468 views

ThunderStormandNatureboy Raven'sFirst Flight  

In the heart, a heart worth saving for a brilliant Clever Raven a well-read, well breed Haven for the poetry writing.

Written verses while he Crack his talons none of the flaw understands his ways to see the Charisma of the Courageous Raven.

He flies with honor, and will die for saving for saving a lot of birds with Grace style and Life the raven perches from the Nest. Recites words that Entice.

To expect his writing to become a Smashing success, the first time since he was born he wanted to become a poet author.

He was into creative ways, rather than feasting upon lives that'd been slaughtered.

Heís been using the blood of his Victims to write the poetic Raven, has just taken his first flight while he took his first flight he got out a paper and his blood pen starting to write about his first Flight in the sky.

But his own words of wisdom dragged the poet to his own demise. A demise of many unfortunate now his flaw of friends, feast on his own corrosion.

They celebrate with high hopes of making the world to see the dedication for the Raven of Poetry.

Then after a month his book came out as the best selling author the poet only gets noticed once he has gone.

To fly out to the Sunset and over the horizon, you can hear the ravenís song.

He Said Caw Caw Caw I am the poet Raven and I am here to see the horizon.

© ThunderStorm - all rights reserved

Author Notes

From your Friends ThunderStorm and Nature Boy

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Comments & Reviews ( X 18)

November 28, 2010
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I don't mean to sound rude or be mean; but, WHAT THE HELL IS THIS???????
The majority of this doesn't even make any sense.
Sorry Thunder, my precious Gentle Soul, but this should not be in the spotlight at all!

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November 27, 2010
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This is great

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November 24, 2010
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This is provocative and delcious!! Thanks for sharing. NatureBoy is one of my favorite writers and I am starting to get into your stuff Thunderstorm!! Way to go guys! :0) bookworm

What am I missing here?????? Can someone please tell me????? I have been writing for a very long time and care very deeply for Thunderstorm; however, not one word of this should be in the spotlight!!! sorry but I am just being honest here. I am sure that my honesty is going to offend some, but then again, I generally do!

 ThePriestess replied on December 02, 2010

November 24, 2010
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Very well written!
Man, what a collaboration you both did! Amazing and udderly Awesome!

I knew you both have great talent! Now use it more often! Show the world what you both have!

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November 23, 2010
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This is a really nice collaboration, something really unique, a mesh of two different poets is always unique. This poem provides hope and motivates us to write. A beautiful link of a poet as a Raven! Nice Done Fellas

Deviant Writer

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November 23, 2010
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Wow that was amazing guys. You should so do that again loved the 6th line is very true for most poets loved the journey, loved the poem great stuff.

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November 23, 2010
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excellent story line here may can make a series out of it , was awesome . took us through several phases , was so intriguing to read what all the raven did, awesome thunder and nature boy , will have to continue the saga of the raven

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November 23, 2010
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Wow, it was quite an honor writing with you thunder. I didn't think our writing styles would match at first, but I was gladly mistaken. We just wrote an epic piece, with one idea of you'rs. " The Poetry Raven " and we took that context to the soul. Just making up scenarios and telling the story of the raven. Congrats my friend.

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