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A Poem by MagicMJ



Author: MagicMJ
Created: November 15, 2010 at 08:33 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.66 Stars by 6 users with 8 comments and 179 views

Tired of Me  

Are you tired of me darling?

I tried to be patient
I tried to be nice
I held on to you
I didn't give up

I've waited for you
For you to open up
But you kept on
Shutting yourself down

Each time I tried
Tried to turn you on
You're more than a snob
Turning yourself to the dark

And then finally you're gone
My efforts went in vain
No matter how I tried
I failed to lighten you up

Now I'm just staring
At your blank screen

I guess you're tired of me darling




Last Modified: November 15, 2010 at 08:39 pm
© MagicMJ - all rights reserved

Author Notes


Hehe...
This is for my crappy laptop... though i love it.
just me bored and being playful... lol
to all my morning and night time chatmates
miss you guys... lol...
Chatroom is a feature I can't access in my fone...
lol...


 
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Comments & Reviews ( X 2)



crazybpd
December 28, 2010
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nice one


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p0rn
November 22, 2010
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nice


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gomsi
November 17, 2010
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Aww
Your laptop becoming naughty... Scold it.. Lol.
Nice funny poem. Enjoyed reading it.
Keep writing.
Gomsi.



(Author)
lol... yeah my naughty laptop...
thanks a lot

 MagicMJ replied on November 17, 2010




benjamin006
November 17, 2010
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Pulchritindous!
Man, at first..I thought it was me you were writing. Then when I saw..."snob"....I said to myself, "Did she just call me that?" lol ( I know it wasn't about me...just teasing you.)

Anyways, seriously...very well written! And, love reading your poems MJ! It just shows you have talent! And, you certainly do!



(Author)
hehehe... yeah it's about you... you're a snob... lol...

thanks for the review...

 MagicMJ replied on November 17, 2010




MichaelFrost
November 16, 2010
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Adorable
Such a wonderfully intriguing piece of work, and to be dedicated/about your laptop, LOL, just amazing. So many possibilities to this one and I love them all!

--Michael Frost



You know, I did click the clappy-people button up there =/ Damn mouse!

  MichaelFrost replied on November 16, 2010


(Author)
hehehe... thanks a lot

 MagicMJ replied on November 17, 2010




carmurr
November 15, 2010
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funny
I liked it. My new laptop drives me crazy at times, so I can actually identify with this poem. I liked it a lot. My crappy laptop, yep, it drives me nuts and so I look at the blank screen too. carmurr



(Author)
thanks a lot

 MagicMJ replied on November 17, 2010




elphie
November 15, 2010
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Well written... All I have to say is the wonder of modern technology.


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Galacticbeam
November 15, 2010
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Try and try to no avail. If you gave 100% then there is nothing else to give. I enjoy the imagery of taking it to the final conclusion. All's well that end's well. The only thing to get is closure. Thanks for sharing


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