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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: November 12, 2010 at 11:33 pm
Upload Type: Poem, T (13+)  
Category: Horror | Sad | Death
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 196 views

Despair heart  

I exposed my heart it is very sad, and forgotten it shatters like a glass.

It bleeds furiously; there is no way to replace my heart with the sadness.

Needle and thread won’t work, not even a staple gun I feel someone try rip my heart out.

Squeezing the blood out of my heart, it brings lust and despairs and rejoices.

A pluck of my hair the wind blows, away just like a leaf lying on the ground.

My own head bounce like a ball, or a broken record waiting to be smash in tiny pieces.

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November 13, 2010
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That's short and nice poem. The fourth line was quite expressive. Enjoyed reading it. Nice work again.
Take care.

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November 12, 2010
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I like it.. Dark, Raw and pulls you right in.

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