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Author: MagicMJ
Created: November 11, 2010 at 03:15 pm
Entry Type: Poem, M (16+)
Category: Lyrics | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments 125 views

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You hit me bad
You struck me, now Iím mad
I canít get you out of my mind

Youíre like a hurricane
A twister in my head
Youíre pumping blood
To my heart like insane

Iím having a heart attack
You invaded my system
I canít get you out of my veins

Iím like an addict
You keep me wanting
Asking for more
I canít live without it

I am having convulsions
Coz a touch from you
A fever, temperature rising

Iím a woman craving
For your hot caresses
Iíll scream for more
You badly know it

So I guess I will just say it
I surrender to you babyÖ Registered & Protected

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Comments & Reviews ( X 1)

November 11, 2010

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Very vivid, MJ! Awesome description of how you feel!

November 11, 2010
thanks a biggie

November 11, 2010

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That was awesome Mj. Add some music to it since its a lyrics... Great poem once again. Keep it up.

November 11, 2010
thanks a lot gomsi


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