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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: November 08, 2010 at 11:15 pm
Upload Type: Poem, T (13+)  
Category: Horror | Death | Sad
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments and 188 views

Wreck Fishing boat  

I have been dismayed for lost and betrayal, it forsaken the wickedest actions.

To see the hallow hall of the forgotten, it awakes the storm of the beast.

The storm of the beast is a raging; funnel cloud that gulps fishermen cast them off to the raging sea.

To see the raging sea it brings sacrifices, lure them in raging waves.

Or typhoons by 1 swipe of the mighty wave, the fishing boat is laid in wrecked.

It spins and spins around and around, like a wrecking ball wrecking a city.

To see of the wickedest devilfish, which is an Octopus wrecking the fishing boat with his mighty 8 arms.

It swallow 20 fishermen, like a piece of sushi it won’t rest till all the fishing boats are destroy.

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November 09, 2010
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this is the deepest stuff Ive ever seen u write. Its good

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November 09, 2010
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nice read... very vivid... and yes this is deep...

the flow was smooth...

nicely penned..

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November 09, 2010
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Deep and thoughtful. I liked it. Good imagery and wording. I liked the context and the flow is great. Such talent.
Thanks for sharing, and keep on writing.

Thanks Arcanin buddy you are a gem for a set of 2 eyes lol

 ThunderStorm replied on November 09, 2010


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