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Nonsense Thoughts



Author: MagicMJ
Created: November 08, 2010 at 05:20 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.25 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments 148 views

Nonsense Thoughts 
I can't sleep again
My mind keeps on wondering
Of what, I really don't know much

I tried to close my eyes
But still thoughts fly
They're like butterflies

I'm like another incandescent light
Flickering through the night
Not dark but not that bright

Nocturnal, yes I am
Like a flying bat
Inside a cave

Maybe I should dose up
Fill my stomach with some pop
And then loosen up to sleep

Now I know this doesn't make sense
Forgive me because my mind is drifting
Not a bit sense I can give to this thing

So I will sign it off
And I hope
No one will get pissed off

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Comments & Reviews ( X 1)

Caroline
November 09, 2010

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Unique!
I really enjoyed this poem. I understand what you are saying here, but you created a great piece of work while your mind was wondering!! keep writing. cc:0)

MagicMJ
November 09, 2010
(Creator)
many thanks



Akatori44
November 08, 2010

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