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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: November 06, 2010 at 08:28 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Free Verse | Free Verse | Free Verse
Upload Stats: 2 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 248 views

Secrets of my heart  

Secrets of my heart…

Sometimes if a heart is beating it knows is purpose

I seek out the answers of my American heart

To hear a cry from a wolf

Or a cry for help I will help a friend or a poet

It is the right thing to do help out

Sometimes if you have bad dreams

© ThunderStorm - all rights reserved

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November 06, 2010
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I have been saying this a lot. A great poet is one who speaks in the same manner in which the common man speaks. If you are going to write a short poem it is critical that your meaning is clear. It is very difficult to accomplish this with those short poems. When a poet does accomplish this he or she is a great poet. I don't think you have enough practice to claim that title. a 'great poet'. you have the potential to become just that. I just think you need a little more work. oh did you mean " sometimes when the heart is beating it knows it's purpose? i dont know. it is your poem

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