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A Poem by MagicMJ

Author: MagicMJ
Created: November 05, 2010 at 03:55 pm
Upload Type: Poem, T (13+)  
Category: Love | Romance | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.87 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments and 426 views

Wish You Were Here  

We are like shadows of the night
Under the moonlit sky, we hide
As you envelope my fragile body
Your loving arms become my shield

I can feel no fear, darkness is nothing
With you here with me, we can be any thing
Lying on the softness of the grass we are free
In our nakedness we build our dreams

Soft caresses from your strong hands
Fight the coldness of the night winds
While my sweet whispers to your ear
Are like a song that brings you to bliss

The moon shines on us as it witnesses "love"
We savor this moment in each other's arms
As we close our eyelids our faces still linger
The heat of our passion still in our breaths

Slowly my eyes open, i longed for your face
But light struck me, I almost got blinded
My hands reach for you, but just empty spaces
I am no where near you, just lying on my bed
And it was only a dream that lingers in my head Registered & Protected

Last Modified: November 05, 2010 at 06:00 pm
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Author Notes

Wrote this for someone dear to me inspired by one of the songs of incubus "Wish You Were Here"

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Comments & Reviews ( X 3)

November 06, 2010
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Awesome visual!
Very well stated, MJ!

thanks a biggie

 MagicMJ replied on November 06, 2010

November 05, 2010
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This poem has a surprising ending. So sad when the rest of the poem is blissful. Although it matches the title.

It should be witnesses and I think the word 'Like' in the third stanza should maybe be "are".

Keep writing


thanks a lot dragon

 MagicMJ replied on November 05, 2010

though I didn't intend this poem to be sad... I'm happy writing this... just missing that person... thanks so many for the review

 MagicMJ replied on November 05, 2010

November 05, 2010
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So Passionate So Tender You Have The Heart Of A True Poet..P.S Such An Amazing Song....!!!

Thanks a lot

 MagicMJ replied on November 05, 2010

November 05, 2010
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beautiful to the last
this is perfect

thanks a lot nirvan

 MagicMJ replied on November 05, 2010


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