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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: November 01, 2010 at 10:00 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Love | Personal
Upload Stats: 4.75 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments and 409 views

~here all the while  

here all the while

scrape me off of the horizon
being back in tanget with you
only you know where you are
see, i'm not sure where you are Boo.

and i say
may you find favor in me.
leave me not in exile
i've been wanting you
here all the while
tune in ,
and set the dial.
i am imagining
the way i feel
when you smile.

scrape me off of the horizon.
blow me a kiss or two.
jet me back
to your latitude
our time is short~
our play-dates are few.

iviedoe 2010

Last Modified: November 01, 2010 at 10:02 pm
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Author Notes

its just a pooem.. hit it hard

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Comments & Reviews ( X 2)

April 29, 2012
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style and touch you have. I wish i could explain it but I am at a loss..Good job though, BW

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January 24, 2011
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Very well done, you seem to have a simple and direct style, but still you show your emotions open and beautifully. I'll be back!

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November 02, 2010
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Luv this so honest and true for the one u love...keep writing ivie miss u!

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