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♥ ~here all the while ♥


Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: November 01, 2010 at 10:00 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Romance | Love | Personal
Entry Stats: 4.75 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments 280 views

~here all the while 
here all the while

scrape me off of the horizon
being back in tanget with you
only you know where you are
see, i'm not sure where you are Boo.

and i say
may you find favor in me.
leave me not in exile
i've been wanting you
here all the while
tune in ,
and set the dial.
i am imagining
the way i feel
when you smile.

c'mon,
scrape me off of the horizon.
blow me a kiss or two.
jet me back
to your latitude
our time is short~
our play-dates are few.

iviedoe 2010



Last Modified: November 01, 2010 at 10:02 pm


Author Notes
its just a pooem.. hit it hard


 

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Comments & Reviews ( X 2)

Caroline
April 29, 2012

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Unique
style and touch you have. I wish i could explain it but I am at a loss..Good job though, BW

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Anika
January 24, 2011

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Congrats!
Very well done, you seem to have a simple and direct style, but still you show your emotions open and beautifully. I'll be back!

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TempestOfNature
November 02, 2010

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Luv this so honest and true for the one u love...keep writing ivie miss u!

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