Profile Home My Writing About Me Latest News
Message Me Members Area Writers-Network Upgrade to PRO
A Poem by MagicMJ

Author: MagicMJ
Created: October 31, 2010 at 06:01 pm
Upload Type: Poem, A (18+)  
Category: Dark | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.75 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 229 views


I want release
Madness please
Can you give me
Some of this

I want release
Escape from me
Take me out
From my disease

I want release
Carry me please
And dig for me
A hole, my graveyard

I want release
A great escape
From myself
From this loneliness

I want release
Kill me please

© MagicMJ - all rights reserved

Author Notes

a thought, a reality or just words... I don't know

The author would love to hear your feedback but you must be logged in to do that. If you are a member of Writers-Network click here to login and review this writing entry.

Not a member? Not a problem! You can register here, it's free for everyone

Comments & Reviews

November 03, 2010
Helpful? Thumbs UpThumbs Down
Great poem and writing.


 MagicMJ replied on November 03, 2010

November 01, 2010
Helpful? Thumbs UpThumbs Down
I liked it, I like the descriptions in it of the need and the repetativeness of "I want release", like if we clap three times and say it is so it will be and it will happen.
Cool write.

Thanks a lot!

 MagicMJ replied on November 01, 2010


Authors, Share Your Book with Millions of Readers

Sponsored Ads By Members was granted non-exclusive rights to display this work.
   All poetry, stories, columns & other member contributions are owned by the poster
   © - All Rights Reserved
   Get Your Free Poetry Site!  |  Read Todays' Writing  |  Dump The Banners!