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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: October 23, 2010 at 10:10 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Collaborations | Collaborations | Collaborations
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 374 views

Thunderstorm and elfqueena Thunderstorm life  

perfect in face to perfect to be worldly bound.

Lighting crashing, a warrior is born with marvelous tributes.

The will to live, the wisdom to love, all for the world below he thunders his sound.

Storming with fury and love and kind, this warrior rages when justice is blind.

He protects the poets and poetess, from feeling like they are alone; he makes one and all feel so at home.

He welcomes them to his castle; with arms opened wide and a smile so sweet he makes life less of a hassle.

To see a guardian angel in open arms, inside the clouds that house the home of thunder.

Thus is the life of thunderstorm a sword of storms wielding the power to destiny, and destiny is the power he wields so well.

When all the powers inside do dwell, sometimes if he feels sad or glad the poets will be there to help him out.

Oh they do for soon they will be in that place, of woe and thunder his love to them he will show them the greatest gift of honor.

© ThunderStorm - all rights reserved

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October 24, 2010
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awe sweetie you did good was a pleasure writing with you, you put it to gether really well , lovs

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October 23, 2010
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You did it
I love the castle and the inmates too !!!!! Really good piece here that invokes a real belief in a cohesive poetic army. Thank you for such an inspirational thoughtful piece.
Yours Kassie

Thanks sissy kassie you are a great sister and a poetic angel after all the greatest gift is honor loyal and courage and light and hope may be peace and blissful for your family and take care and Happy halloween

 ThunderStorm replied on October 24, 2010

awe thanks so much Kass your a real sweet heart , and thunder you did good on this made it really yours ,lol

 elfqueena replied on October 24, 2010

yes poetic mom kassie is such a young one she is so loyal with her poems and fantasic writing her legacy will burn brightly just like me together the 3 of us will burn our's legacy together like true american heros

 ThunderStorm replied on November 06, 2010

qawe thank you sweetit ,

 elfqueena replied on November 06, 2010

October 23, 2010
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Good job, guys! I had no idea you were doing a collaboration, which I assume is what this is. It's really well done, I wish I knew who designed each part, but that's just for my own, personal knowledge.

Anyway! You two work really well together, so I hope to see more from the two of you in the future. Keep up the great writing!

Thank you Kim, it was a joint effort . Thunder is such a swell guy , and he probably would love for you to do a coll . with him too . thanks babe , ELf

 elfqueena replied on October 24, 2010


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