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A Poem by MagicMJ

Author: MagicMJ
Created: October 22, 2010 at 05:57 am
Upload Type: Poem, M (16+)  
Category: Sad | Dark | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 249 views


Ashes joined the clouds above my head
Turning the blue sky into darkened gray
Raging thunder coincides with my heartbeat
Storm is nearing, great winds are blowing

Now drops of water are falling from the lonely sky
Touching my senses, awakening my darkness
Like blood and tears dripping, loneliness seeps in
And asking the lightning to strike me from within

Inside me are thousands of unspoken emotions
Flooding me, I am drowning from my own demons
Looking for a life vest, I need it to see my salvation
Because I am too blinded by the haze of this hurricane

The rain, the thunder, the lightning, the great winds
All consumed me, ravaging everything in me
So, I just knelt, hold on to my shivering body
Waiting for the moment to be taken...

By the storm within me...

© MagicMJ - all rights reserved

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Comments & Reviews

November 05, 2010
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Very nice Acrostic!
I sense a "storm is brewing", huh? lol

hahaha... yeah... another storm is coming thanks a lot...

 MagicMJ replied on November 05, 2010


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