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My Candle


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: October 21, 2010 at 03:41 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Free Verse | Free Verse | Free Verse
Entry Stats: 4.75 Stars by 4 users with 5 comments 148 views

My Candle 
My Candle…

My candle color is purple and black

I am waiting till the sunsets beyond the horizon

The candle is on my Chester drawer

When the full moon is coming I lit the Candle

Sometimes I feel lonely with my favorite Candle

But am I not afraid of the darkness

I love to see in the dark

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Comments & Reviews ( X 3)

gothpoet_2012
November 08, 2010

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very good i like it its very creative and descriptive

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elfqueena
October 21, 2010

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awe
Such a sweet darlin poem thunder , this is one of your bestloved it was totally awesome and so well done , great flow in this and so filled with feeling and color , beautiful p.son , simply beautfiul

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gomsi
October 21, 2010

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Nice one
That was a nice poem to read Thunder. Enjoyed reading it.
Keep on writing. Great Job.
-Gomsi.


ThunderStorm
November 07, 2010
(Creator)
thanks man i love to write poetry so much it's warmth my soul and i will help you or a poet you are a awesome friend and courageous spirit in my heart



Kiss4angelology
October 21, 2010

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Sweet and Elegant
This was very good thunder. I had a sweet and gentle apeal.

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washedupwriter
October 21, 2010

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Beautifull
Thunder.... this is a beautiful write.
its so graceeful yet elegant
it was a wonderful creation you made.
my heart and soul was lifted reading this

keep up the great work
im proud that you are my teacher


ThunderStorm
October 21, 2010
(Creator)
well after i Submit my 1,012 poem i will teach you and the others you are my Bright Student




      

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