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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: October 21, 2010 at 03:41 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Free Verse | Free Verse | Free Verse
Upload Stats: 4.75 Stars by 4 users with 5 comments and 273 views

My Candle  

My Candle…

My candle color is purple and black

I am waiting till the sunsets beyond the horizon

The candle is on my Chester drawer

When the full moon is coming I lit the Candle

Sometimes I feel lonely with my favorite Candle

But am I not afraid of the darkness

I love to see in the dark

© ThunderStorm - all rights reserved

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November 08, 2010
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very good i like it its very creative and descriptive

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October 21, 2010
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Such a sweet darlin poem thunder , this is one of your bestloved it was totally awesome and so well done , great flow in this and so filled with feeling and color , beautiful p.son , simply beautfiul

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October 21, 2010
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Nice one
That was a nice poem to read Thunder. Enjoyed reading it.
Keep on writing. Great Job.

thanks man i love to write poetry so much it's warmth my soul and i will help you or a poet you are a awesome friend and courageous spirit in my heart

 ThunderStorm replied on November 07, 2010

October 21, 2010
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Sweet and Elegant
This was very good thunder. I had a sweet and gentle apeal.

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October 21, 2010
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Thunder.... this is a beautiful write.
its so graceeful yet elegant
it was a wonderful creation you made.
my heart and soul was lifted reading this

keep up the great work
im proud that you are my teacher

well after i Submit my 1,012 poem i will teach you and the others you are my Bright Student

 ThunderStorm replied on October 21, 2010


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