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Heart of fire

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: October 20, 2010 at 08:41 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Free Verse | Free Verse | Free Verse
Entry Stats: 3 comments 158 views
Heart of fire
Heart of fire…

I see my heart burning brightly

It glows like a phoenix rose from the ashes

The wings of a phoenix is glows bright in the sky

Just like an egg waiting to be hatched from a volcano

Seeing a newborn phoenix hatch for the first time

Day by day it grow to a teenager phoenix

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gothpoet_2012
November 09, 2010

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liked this
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BladeFly002
October 20, 2010

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you like phoenix's dont you bro. good write my friend. and feel free to show me others now that uive gotten back on the site
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elfqueena
October 20, 2010

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beautiful
awe this was so beautiful son, loved it was so sweet , i like the way you made this so reall , I love baby anythings any ways and can imagine a baby phoenix , oh that would be an awesome sight , loved this poem was so darn good , so proud of you for writing such a sweet poem as this. lovs P>MOM
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