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A Poem by MagicMJ



Author: MagicMJ
Created: October 20, 2010 at 06:14 am
Upload Type: Poem, A (18+)  
Category: Lyrics | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.4 Stars by 5 users with 6 comments and 218 views

I will free my SOUL  

I...
I can't breathe
I...
I am sinking in
I...
I am losing it
No one can save me now
I fucking hate this life

No... Don't try to reach my soul
I'm far from being delusional
My thoughts are all corrupted now
Demons creeping in me, so hollow

You... You think you're damn perfect
Guess what, you're fucking hypocrite
I don't need your hands full of shit
So take them now, stick them in your ass

I...
I am no where to be found
I...
I no longer belong in your hand
No one owns my shit
I will free my soul

No... Don't try to reach my soul
I'm far from being irrational
My mind is more than radical
Don't need your narrow mind

You... You think you're damn perfect
I'll slap your face with your filth
You are way worse than my shit
You're a disgrace among lunatics

I will free my soul....

Yes... You can't hurt me now
I am stronger now
I will find my new self
Yes... You won't be around
When I stand the ground
And liberate my self

I will free my soul...
I will free my soul...
I will free my soul...

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Last Modified: November 05, 2010 at 06:03 pm
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Author Notes


This would be a heavy metal song...



 
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Comments & Reviews



Lafonda
November 01, 2010
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I like it (:
Bit repetitive though.



(Author)
Thanks

 MagicMJ replied on November 01, 2010




washedupwriter
October 20, 2010
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MJ
This was a great write!
stunning i can feel the emotion drip off every word!
well done!



(Author)
thanks a lot wuw

 MagicMJ replied on October 21, 2010




TriamiArack
October 20, 2010
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*Headbang*
Speaking from the heart and pain of a true Metal Head MJ, speaking loud and clear. I could actually hear a band like 5fdp playing this song, the raging guitars expressing your feeling and hatred. Rock on loud, rock out forever, keep this up MJ, you truly are impressive in your writing style compared to some.



(Author)
wow... thanks a lot tri

 MagicMJ replied on October 20, 2010




veselk0
October 20, 2010
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Nice piece. Yes this is a heavy metal song. It's hard for me that a person with nickname "Peacelovr" likes heavy metal, because heavy metal is violent and I don't think that a Peace Lover would like this kind of songs xD. Enough about that. I usually when I listen heavy metal, I can't really hear the words, so... If this goes to a song at least I will know the lyrics xD. Keep Writing!



(Author)
Thanks a lot

 MagicMJ replied on October 20, 2010




Peacelovr
October 20, 2010
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A very interesting and powerful write. These lyrics suit a heavy metal song indeed-the best music there is! I really enjoyed reading this, for it is full of pain and fire and passion. A brilliant portrayal of these emotions in your words. I would love to listen to this song. The profanity, in this case, makes the theme more effective and the brutal tone of your words is just excellent. Awesome write!



(Author)
wow... thanks a lot...

 MagicMJ replied on October 20, 2010


(Author)
wow... thanks a lot...

 MagicMJ replied on October 20, 2010


(Author)
wow... thanks a lot...

 MagicMJ replied on October 20, 2010




Johnnie
October 20, 2010
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At first I think maybe you are actually dilusional and irrational. i was interested and wanted to read more, congrats. i dig it



(Author)
Thanks a lot...

 MagicMJ replied on October 20, 2010






      

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