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A Report by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: October 20, 2010 at 12:01 am
Upload Type: Report, G (All)  
Category: Science Fiction | General/Other | Weird
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 292 views

Glowing Heart  

You have bought out, my glowing Heart to beat rapidly

It will beat forever, till it stops pumping blood through my veins.

Through my lower spine, and through my ankles and my knees.

My heart is the locket to my blood system sometimes I have been wondering.

What will happen if my heart is not working, there is only 1 answer?

To seek the answer or find out the answer in my brilliant mind.

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November 06, 2010
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Nice work once again.
Answer is hidden. That gives a rise to a secret. You may right about that hidden answer of your mind in a different poem with description.
And the poem is nice all over. Keep writing.

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