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Ring... Ring...

Author: MagicMJ
Created: October 17, 2010 at 01:25 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Lyrics | Love | Romance
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments 182 views

Ring... Ring... 
Oh... I stopped
I hear a ringing
Don't know where
The sound is coming

I can't tell
But I feel it's getting
Close to my... beating
Heart.... Ooohh...

Your heart is dialing
The number
The connection
To a lover
And your ringing
On the door bell
Of my... silent heart

Oh... Oh... Wooh...

Ring... Ring... Ring...
Gonna pick up
Your heart dear
I will answer it
With sweet kiss
Don't worry about
The bill please
Coz it's worth
Than just pennies
More than dollars
You know it is
Can't do the tricks
Even Einstein
Would miss this
The formula
Of our simple love

repeat chorus 2x


Oh... I stopped
I hear a ringing
Don't know where
The sound is coming...

Oh... It's my phone
My honey is calling

Author Notes
lol... Just being playful... This would be like a jason mraz beat... I hope so... lol...

i hope you enjoy this...


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Comments & Reviews

October 18, 2010

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Sounds much like my first attempts at love songs, only yours takes simple love and compares it to a phone ringing; an interesting metaphor. Your words flow from your heart, to your pen, to paper in a smooth steady trickle, making it easy to understand. Great write MJ, even dark writers can write love.

October 18, 2010
aww... thanks a lot tri...

October 17, 2010

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it great the words good good together

October 18, 2010
Thanks a lot Haley...


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