This was sort of scary dearone . made me almost think you did this ,( but know its just part of the storyline lol) would hate to know someone did this to theirselves in real life its really sad if they did , you did good babe as you always do .hope next part not so gory lol. lov's p.mom
Alright, I'm not really feeling this. Seems like someone might write in an attempt to shock, but it seems like a lot of words thrown hazardly together without a lot of thought. The main concept is interesting, but overall, it's not very engaging and it doesn't make a lot of sense. But maybe I'm not getting the point when it's big and obvious. I tend to do that.