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Gothic Thorns part 4

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: October 13, 2010 at 06:57 pm
Entry Type: Poem, T (13+)
Category: Horror | Dark | Death
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 2 comments 135 views
Gothic Thorns part 4 
I screamed my lungs out furiously in my anger are beyond imagination.

I pierce my head with 70 thumbtacks and including my arms I want to be scarred for a lifetime.

I cracked my own wrist but for pain I love to see the blood and sweat and tears.

I am willing and sacrifice my own spine to anyone who needs it or my own brain.

I cut my own ankle in half then my toes and feed it to the hounds of hell.

I love to see the Illusionists torture themselves bleed Enteral

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elfqueena
October 14, 2010

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This was sort of scary dearone . made me almost think you did this ,( but know its just part of the storyline lol) would hate to know someone did this to theirselves in real life its really sad if they did , you did good babe as you always do .hope next part not so gory lol. lov's p.mom
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tornINKstain
October 13, 2010

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Alright, I'm not really feeling this. Seems like someone might write in an attempt to shock, but it seems like a lot of words thrown hazardly together without a lot of thought. The main concept is interesting, but overall, it's not very engaging and it doesn't make a lot of sense. But maybe I'm not getting the point when it's big and obvious. I tend to do that.
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