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A Poem by ThunderStorm


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: October 10, 2010 at 12:20 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Free Verse | Free Verse | Free Verse
Upload Stats: 4.33 Stars by 3 users with 4 comments and 177 views

The fate of Illusion  

The fate of Illusion…

The fates of the mind

The caster of mind-twirling Illusions

I see my mind Warping in Agony

To see a candle lit flame goes up in flames

A meteor crashed down to earth




© ThunderStorm - all rights reserved


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Comments & Reviews ( X 2)



gothpoet_2012
November 09, 2010
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love how u poor ur heart out in short pieces


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PacificLion
October 11, 2010
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Lovely!
Your work is so different Thunder. You have such a unique style.

Brilliant

James


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washedupwriter
October 10, 2010
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Great!
The imagery and flow was amazing Thunder,
the emotions were present throughout the poem
Superb work like always!!


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black-wings
October 10, 2010
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I took this as an illusion is something we see and sometimes we become upset when we found out its only an illusion and not the real thing?? I hope Im right lol


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