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Lost Angel

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: October 06, 2010 at 08:42 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Free Verse | Romance | Love
Entry Stats: 4.5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments 155 views

Lost Angel 
Lost Angel….

The glass it shatters, in my hand.

My lost angel, at last we meet.

I Love you

I can taste the cold steel on my fingers

We are mighty proud of god and his angels

He is inside everyone’s hearts

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October 06, 2010

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I liked this alot. But what I think I liked the most is that it kept me guessing. For example when I read the first line I though this would be a poem about a deep pain, but once i read the second line i felt love and compassion.

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