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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: October 06, 2010 at 08:42 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Free Verse | Romance | Love
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 246 views

Lost Angel  

Lost Angel….

The glass it shatters, in my hand.

My lost angel, at last we meet.

I Love you

I can taste the cold steel on my fingers

We are mighty proud of god and his angels

He is inside everyone’s hearts

© ThunderStorm - all rights reserved

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October 06, 2010
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I liked this alot. But what I think I liked the most is that it kept me guessing. For example when I read the first line I though this would be a poem about a deep pain, but once i read the second line i felt love and compassion.

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