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Gothic Thorns part 3


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: October 05, 2010 at 07:48 pm
Entry Type: Poem, T (13+)
Category: Horror | Dark | Death
Entry Stats: 4.83 Stars by 3 users with 5 comments 180 views

Gothic Thorns part 3 
The anger of my flesh it has left me, inside a Cremation oven it burns my wicked soul.

Even the coffin collapsed on my soul, it slowly roasted my charbroil heart on a skewer.

My body has been sign with the reaper, I raked my own eyeballs.

I canít swim without any arms; I chopped off my own arms blood pour everywhere in the pool.

I collapsed inside the morgue, Puking up blood and slowly my Brain been pureed.

My intestines spill out by the leeches, it feeds the leeches willing at hand.

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Comments & Reviews ( X 6)

kntinaz
October 09, 2010

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To never die, to watch the pumping blood, gorgeously thick leeches lick. Your words have made me sick, but your writing brings thoughts of brew. Gothic Thorns a rite from you...Thanks for sharing...Tony

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JoelPhillips
October 08, 2010

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Atack!!!
Atack!!!

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elfqueena
October 05, 2010

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argh!!!
OH man babe I was eating a strawberry shortcake when read this , you know what happened , no I didnt puke but almost lmao. Hey this one was really gross ( not the poem, the description lol) very detailed babe almost realistic . I wish I had waited to read it when I wasn't eating lol. very good details here babe , I really appreciate the details and was so vivid. eek sure glad its just a poem and not real . excellent poem babe lov p.mom

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Azalas434
October 05, 2010

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Hmm...
Interesting. Now that's a poem! if you could sell these somehow maybe somebody would buy it.

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clowen
October 05, 2010

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Feeling squeamish
Continuation of the Gothic Thorns series and really right now it was a great piece and the details were so vivid..that it made me really think about the scene laid out before my eyes. And now I'm a bit squeamish because of it, thanks for allowing me the chance to read this story. Take care.

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