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A Poem by ThunderStorm


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: September 28, 2010 at 02:58 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Free Verse | Free Verse
Upload Stats: 4.91 Stars by 6 users with 7 comments and 250 views

Chocolate With Romance  

Chocolate with Romance…

Romance is like Love and poetry combined

Chocolate is like Ice cream and Roses mix

Romance is like 2 couples smooching and kissing

Chocolate is like eating a Cake of Chocolate

Romance is like sharing a slice of cake together

Chocolate is like sweet fragrant of perfume

Romance is like sweet smells of flowers

Chocolate is like making Love

Romance is inside your hearts

Chocolate is like eating dessert pasta to crave

Romance is like opening a love letter to your sweetheart


© ThunderStorm - all rights reserved

Author Notes


My 600th poem is now here and I am officially crying in happiness


 
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Comments & Reviews ( X 8)



elfqueena
September 28, 2010
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BRAVO, BRAVO
WOW AND YIPPEE ! So proud of you , you did it and wiith such a beautiful poem , this is your best , i think its such a beautfiul sweet poem makes my heart weep from the swetness of it , am so proud of you and so pleased your my p. son , you have out did your self and I know its already been spotlighted but I am doing it too , and if had ten applauds I would give you eleven , great job son , so proud 600 poems yes! I knew you could do it , P.mom


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GABSTBOZ
September 28, 2010
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Congratulations Thunder on poem # 600. A poem about great subject matter, mmmm chocolate and ooohhYeah romance(can you hear Barry White saying That)

Smiles
Gabor


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The_Fictionist
September 28, 2010
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Awww
Don't know why, but this was really sweet and made me smile.
Lovely poem.

Congrats on your 600th!! =)
EVERYBODY DANCE NOW!


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washedupwriter
September 28, 2010
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Great!
congrats on the 600th poem thunderstorm!
it was a great read
great imagery lies within this writing!
dont stop at 600 keep er going!


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Kassandra
September 28, 2010
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Yay 600
I love reading your thoughts bro for real you are such an inspiration on this site. Thank you, Kassie


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Arcanin
September 28, 2010
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Congratulations!
I congratulate you on 600 poems! You've done such a great job! You're awesome, and we all love you ^^ (you know what I mean)


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gomsi
September 28, 2010
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Nice one
Congrats for your 600 poems. You have written the 'Free Verse' very well. Romance is wonderful. Great job. Keep on writing.


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