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A Poem by ThunderStorm


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: September 25, 2010 at 03:31 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Free Verse | Inspirational | Free Verse
Upload Stats: 4.83 Stars by 6 users with 6 comments and 203 views

Free verse with Gomsi  

Gomsi…

A brilliant teacher by the mind

He is a master of wisdom

He has taught me to write free verse poetry

He is in the Zone

My Greatest friend is now my favorite teacher

He spins my brain with power and knowledge

Like a mighty tornado it swirls my mind

Like a big mighty gust of wind

Trapping in a vortex or a black hole

Or a typhoon it does not matter for Gomsi

He is a master of the arts of free verse



© ThunderStorm - all rights reserved


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Comments & Reviews ( X 6)



HPGreg
September 26, 2010
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Cool
A writer can do a lot with free verse writing, I have written a few myself. I like the way you composed this writing, weaving together your words to bring out what your heart is wanting to say and express. Hats off to Gomsi, the master of free verse writing. After reading this, makes me want to start writing one myself.
Thanks for sharing,
HPGreg


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Mamoon
September 26, 2010
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very dark poem . I like dark poetry. It has dark hole in it that can flush people down in the dark. I liked it .

u'r mamoon brothers



i like dark collaborations.

 Mamoon replied on September 26, 2010




benjamin006
September 25, 2010
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Pulchrituously Awesome!
Gomsi is a great friend and a wonderful man! Glad that he deserves this! Very nicely written Thunder! Awesome!


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Kassandra
September 25, 2010
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Beautiful
Gomsi is awesome and you wrote this so beautifully. Full marks from em my poetic bro. Loved this totally.
Yours Kassie


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emeraldeyes
September 25, 2010
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Yay for free verse
Nice Job, Thunderstorm. I like this a lot. Peace ! ee


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gomsi
September 25, 2010
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Thank you
Thank you very very much. You really have the flair to write as I have already said. I really enjoyed reading it.
Its an honor for me. Thank you once again. Keep writing.
GOD Bless you Thunder.
Gomsi.


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