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A Poem by ThunderStorm


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: September 25, 2010 at 03:06 pm
Upload Type: Poem, T (13+)  
Category: Free Verse | Free Verse | Death
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 161 views

Demons beware  

Demons beware…

To see a shadowy flight of death

To see your bones crush into fine powder

To see your neck collapsed twisting and turning

To see a demons neck blood gushing out from the neck

A sword stab a demons eye he can’t see sight any more

An angel of earth playing soft music to vanish the demon

To see a demon angry at a angel piercing the heart of a Demon

A fallen angel will not forgotten the memories that he has to share


© ThunderStorm - all rights reserved

Author Notes


Many Thanks to Gomsi he helped me out big time


 
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Comments & Reviews ( X 4)



PacificLion
September 26, 2010
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Certainly not your usual style Thunder, but good none the less.

Prefer your tributes though!

Keep up the excellent work.


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elfqueena
September 25, 2010
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awesome is all I can say here dear son, loved this poem and loved how you told it . was simply awesomely done , great piece and so well written ,


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gomsi
September 25, 2010
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Demons will end soon. I am sure about that. Great job. You have written the piece very well. I enjoyed reading it.
Oh! Thank you man. But the entire theme and plot came in your mind. So that was a nice poem to read. Hoping to see more from You.


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