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Shake it baby

Author: MagicMJ
Created: September 24, 2010 at 11:15 pm
Entry Type: Poem, E (Explicit Language)
Category: Erotica | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.25 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments 232 views

Shake it baby 
Sweat dripping on that hot damn body
Circular motions as you shake that booty
Hip movements so fucking lovely
As I watch you sway, I feel so hotty

Your long black hair floats so sexy
But please don't lay that brown eyes
On me baby, I will be on fire girly
You will feel my heat on you baby

Oh no, don't move that booty
Close to me honey, I'll slap it hard
That you'll scream for more baby
And you'll regret for being naughty

Just shake that booty, sway it honey
Let me grin from ear to ear baby
Let me feel hot as I sweat for you girly
Let me fantasize what I can do on that body

Author Notes
sorry wrote this out of boredom... lol...
Just for the readers i'm not a confused dudette...
Just tried to be on men's shoes... Lol...


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Comments & Reviews ( X 1)

November 09, 2010

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This is truly different in the fact that you wrote from a man's point of view. Everything flows well! I could see this being a song! great work!

November 09, 2010
many many thanks

October 03, 2010

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very nicely done mj , like the rhythm here lol no pun intended lol , was a good read babe , loved the way you tried to take the mans point of view in the process , it was a good try . thanks for sharing lol

October 03, 2010
thanks a lot elf...
big hugs

October 03, 2010
awe your welcomed babe , Elfqueena

September 26, 2010

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It is always hard to write from the other gender perspective and do justice. I think you have managed to pull it off here. Though just to stick up for my XY brothers for a minute sometimes we just love you ladies for your minds and personality, not always just for a juicy booty. ; ) Nice work here. D

September 27, 2010
thanks a lot D
yes, I agree men do love ladies for their minds and personality too...

September 24, 2010

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Lol this was a funny poem, yet sweet in an odd way. Shake that ass girl hahhaaaha. Nice write (:

September 25, 2010
lol... thanks kayla...
just experimenting...


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