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A Poem by ThunderStorm


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: September 22, 2010 at 08:50 am
Upload Type: Poem, T (13+)  
Category: Sad | Inspirational | Spiritual
Upload Stats: 4.09 Stars by 5 users with 5 comments and 192 views

The Warrior's mark  

Sometimes if a warrior, realizes of instant karma he will sacrifice for the loved ones.

That he love deeply so much, inside of his very own will be at rejoiced.

But if a true warrior, realizes of the pain and the agony of defeat.

To see a mark of a warrior, the scars that he bled furiously.

To see an arrow pierce, through the mighty flesh of a warrior.

Although is a legend, to see a warrior buried inside the earth.

Thatís a true mark, of a warrior he lives on for the entire world for warriors.


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Comments & Reviews ( X 1)



kriddell
September 22, 2010
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a warriors smile
through few words you have conveyed strong emotions that nearly had me rattling sword on shield. very nicely done!


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grandpapidood
September 22, 2010
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Hmm
Good stuff. Really gud, tho some of ur linkin of sentences almost got me lost!!!.


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Shadows
September 22, 2010
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Decent
Good potential. It's a bit scattered and didn't flow so well.


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MagicMJ
September 22, 2010
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hmmm... different...

it's nicely written and with strong emotions...

thought I'm a bit lost with the flow... maybe it's just me

but overall a nice write..


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Arcanin
September 22, 2010
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beautiful
Truly a fantastic piece of art. Amazing, the details you can make with these few words. True feelings comes from the heart, and I think you have done a great job at writing it. The flow is great. There is talent here, although the last stanza had a little too many syllables, but that's probably just me. Bottom line is: You are great. Keep on writing!



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