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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: September 19, 2010 at 08:51 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Collaborations | Collaborations | Collaborations
Upload Stats: 4.66 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 336 views

ThunderStorm and Elfqueena's Crooked Arrow  

The pain was what had hit him first, when cupid's arrow came and to his heart did it burst.

Of love's last blossom burst in screams, it sounds like a Reality or love of the arrows to reach inside the hearts of many I can't bared the agony of defeat.
Whenever cupidís arrow goes astray, he comes to ruin a brand new day

He may strike an arrow inside and out, and watch as many stands up to shout is a special day to spread the love.

Cupids crooked arrows has everlasting reach charms, should be reaching out for dearly love ones.

as he shoots love will soon come, at full circle to reach in the moon lit sky.

and watch as Cupid's arrow fly, with grace and style and beauty.

the world wakes up to love's own duty, to bring the honor and romance in the air tonight.

to see sight beyond sight, of lover's entwined beneath the bright moonlight.

to spread the evening of peace and respect, So all can rest in loves own nest.

to spend love and rejoice, this was after all cupid's choice.

to see cupid has done his great work, for couples and couples alike.

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Comments & Reviews ( X 3)

September 20, 2010
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ThunderStorm & Elfqueena: Good job, you two! I love the title... Love is not so straightforward, is it? Lots of bumpy roads and crooked arrows, eh?

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September 19, 2010
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well !
that turned out so much better then when in pieces babe was awesome and really fun to do . loved working with you it was such a joy to do , and turned out real well . bravo,

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September 19, 2010
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Romantic piece here and well thought out and enhanced by imagery of cupid etc. Loved the whole feeling this created from the start. Good work
Yours Kassie

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