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Tears of a warrior

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: September 19, 2010 at 05:50 pm
Entry Type: Poem, T (13+)
Category: Fantasy | Spiritual | Sad
Entry Stats: 4.5 Stars by 3 users with 4 comments 138 views
Tears of a warrior 
Hello my friend we meet again, it has been a while has in it warrior.

To see you late last night, it just brings happiness tears to see a light in the realm.

I have been seeing the stars of your shadowy figure, I thought you were lost.

In cold depths of space, I nearly cried my eyes out for the pain and the suffering.

To the order of regain consciousness, it brings the crossroads of torture.

It was been brutality aching month, as I lie down on my bed just been thinking of the freezing depths.

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Comments & Reviews ( X 9)

Kassandra
September 19, 2010

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:) Love this
Another good write, I love the stuff you are coming up with lately and I hope there is more to come soon I wanted it longer too
Yours Kassie

Typo alert : it has been a while has in it warrior. (hasn't it warrior)
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elfqueena
September 19, 2010

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awesome
wow you have really been using your poertry mind here lately this was awesome . loved what you did it was awesome , loved it the story line was excellent my son , bravo !
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emeraldeyes
September 19, 2010

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Nice
Hello there Thunderstorm. .. Hello my friend we meat again is a fabulous opening line. It could start a number of great poems. Great concept. I'd like to hear more about the freezing depths. Brrrrr. Peace ! ee
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TheMatter
September 19, 2010

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Great Idea
Really like the genre you choose to write with, however i would have like to see it a bit longer i was getting into the concept and it was then over, your grammar is a little off but i got the idea, look forward to reading some more of your work, especially of this type
Keep the good work going
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