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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: September 19, 2010 at 11:42 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Weird | Ghost | Weird
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 2 comments and 270 views

Ghost school  

I walked in the murky waters of illusion, and then I feel something grabbing my leg.

It was an old twisty branch, so luckily I reach into my pocketknife.

Cut the twisty branch, then I was free for the most part that is.

Then I saw a haunted house, quite charming house by my standards.

Well at least the fireplace is nice warm, so I decorated the house.

Turn into the school for poetry, so the students can learn the mighty fine points of poems.

So far over 45 students came to the school, it was a cool idea of the brilliance.

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September 19, 2010
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the fictionist is right on it would make for a good story , and could be quiet interesting , very cool poem babe as usual ,must be at 590 about now huh lol , bravo babe

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September 19, 2010
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Interesting idea. Would make a great short story - the ghost school of writing! Starring Shakespeare and the many dead writers, published or unpublished of the ages.

Love it =)

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