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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: September 18, 2010 at 10:05 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Fantasy | Environment | Fantasy
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 283 views


To see a cloud in the sky, to see a rolling thundercloud with rain and thunder and lighting.

Gaze at that cloud to drop down rain, then if you hear thundering.

Donít be afraid it just telling you, that a storm is coming this way.

1. Donít put your own car in dangerous flooding waters is not safe.

2. Donít leave your car in the parking lot when hail comes it will smash your glass.

© ThunderStorm - all rights reserved

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September 18, 2010
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I like this , people need to be reminded not to drive in to dangerous flood water, and they need think of what hail can do to your windows and yourself if your out in it. loved way you put this out there as a free verse and as a public service cool way to do it great job ,dear one ,

sorry i had to work late my poetic mom but tomorrow i am off so tomorrow we will work on that collab i am just curious what time you are going be on let me know!!!

 ThunderStorm replied on September 18, 2010

oh babe it may be at least seven oclock tomorrow evening as my boyfriend has to use his computer to do his work on and we only have one hook up for the computers so i have to wait to use mine, but will try and be on around seven if that is alright , lov ya

 elfqueena replied on September 19, 2010

seven sounds good to me you are lucky soul for my schedule on monday i need go to the doctors at 1:00 p.m. and i won't be on october 1st cause i got my bowling tournment i will be back around 4:00 I love ya so much love P.son

 ThunderStorm replied on September 19, 2010

awe Thanks babe and will be in here at or around seven dont give up on me , love you too baby son ,

 elfqueena replied on September 19, 2010

September 18, 2010
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i am really not sure how to take this piece lol. is it a poem or a public service announcement? maybe both. but i do find it interesting, thank you

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