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A Poem by MagicMJ

Author: MagicMJ
Created: September 18, 2010 at 07:51 am
Upload Type: Poem, E (Explicit Language)  
Category: Erotica | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.64 Stars by 7 users with 7 comments and 277 views

SHE Can be a Sl*tty  

Soft voice, gentle moves
Always goes with the norm
Speaks only of nice words
Too shy to do dirty talks

Smiles timidly
Doesn't act bitchy
Prim and proper
She's a goody girl

But hold on, sheesh
Can you keep a secret?
This goody girl can be a slutty
She can be for her honey

Come on honey
I can be your lil slutty
Teach me baby
Make me horny

Your decent woman
In the eyes of many
Your little slut girl
In our private space baby

Touch me anywhere you please
Kiss me anywhere you want
I saved them all just for you
Yep, invaded by no one just you

Fuck me any way you like
Savor my body, it's yours baby
Every part of me is goody
You know that honey

Just tell me I'm the only one
Your heart, your mind, your thingy
All belong to me baby
Don't fool around with other lady

Because I will love you
With all my hearty
You won't regret it
For being my honey

But never lie to me baby
Cause I'll rip you open surely
You'll forget the goody girl
Cause I'll kick your sorry ass
That's for sure...

© MagicMJ - all rights reserved

Author Notes

just a thought... hmmm...

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Comments & Reviews ( X 1)

November 28, 2010
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aha this seemed like a fun write.
i liked the flow to it.
and the content was done in such a well way.
very good Mj.
such a fun read.

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November 09, 2010
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this is a nice just has an edgy feel about it that I like!!! keep up the good work!

thanks again appreciated a lot...

 MagicMJ replied on November 09, 2010

October 12, 2010
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Very nice
Really enjoyed that Lil ride

thanks a lot

 MagicMJ replied on October 12, 2010

September 21, 2010
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I am struck first by the competing emotions in here, there is a passion that runs through both sides of this and holds it together. Second I am struck by the fact that you used the word "fuck" but then chose "thingy", that part throew me off just a little bit, I think you go one way or the other with the language, either way I like the power in the piece, it works. Nice job. D

lol... thanks for the review...
and yeah... a bit off with the thingy

 MagicMJ replied on September 22, 2010

September 18, 2010
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What can I say,....I LOVE this!! the last stanza made me laugh but in a 'ahuh, watch out for this one sort of way'. lol thank you again for sharing

thanks a lot... glad you liked it...
trying to be naughty here... sheesh... lol...

 MagicMJ replied on September 18, 2010

September 18, 2010
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Great work! Keep up the great writing!

thanks a lot!

 MagicMJ replied on September 18, 2010

September 18, 2010
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Well done
Nice write. I can feel the matter in every line. Wonderfully written. Hoping to read more from Your poem.

thanks a lot...

 MagicMJ replied on September 18, 2010

My Pleasure.

 gomsi replied on September 18, 2010


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