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Muy Caletine


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: September 16, 2010 at 05:27 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Fantasy | Weird | Fantasy
Entry Stats: 4.5 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments 174 views

Muy Caletine 
Muy Caliente is a sheriff for the cattle ranch, down in Texas were over 34,000 pounds of Cattle.

She is quite shy for the hot baking sun, if she stares in the hot sun she starts to roast.

Although she loves the peaceful nighttime, skies to see all the herds tuck in for the night.

It is quite peaceful here at the Caliente ranch, to see the start of a brand new morning.

Muy Caliente branded the cattle with a hot curling iron, for the cattle.

To see the beyond wishing stars, to see the world and entire generation.


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Comments & Reviews

KitSilver
September 29, 2010

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well done
The feeling of heat and warmth seemed to be in every line in some way or another, great job!

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Icinia
September 18, 2010

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ThunderStorm: You wrote: "Muy Caliente is a sheriff for the cattle ranch..." Now, who else would have thought to name a character Muy Caliente? It's a great idea and very clever. Bravo!

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Dom1n1ck
September 17, 2010

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Cool
This is a very creative spin on the phrase. The thing I enjoy most about these challegnes is the diversity in the way the topic is presented by all of you very talented writers. Fun read here. Very nice work. D

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dreamergirl123
September 16, 2010

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great
good job, it was very creative and i like dit

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