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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: September 15, 2010 at 12:21 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Fantasy | Love
Upload Stats: 4.37 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments and 298 views

MoonLit Dancer  

On a moonlit night, I danced with a beautiful girl in my dreams.

Quite shy she is, I ask her if I may have this dance of the evening.

We danced to our favorite song, the title of the song is called I donít wanna stop by ozzy osbourne.

Then she spoke to me, she said you are the beautiful dancer and I said thank you.

Even I told her you are the cutest dancer, she was falling in Love.

Deeply in love if I may add, then she saw glanced at me and she whispered to me.

She asked me to married me, in the future so maybe if I will.

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Comments & Reviews ( X 3)

September 18, 2010
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Thank you for swaying my thoughts into that bal, if only it actually had taken place. Your words are lovely, the way they are turned into balsam of the harsh realitiy. Thank you. I can rest, feel calm. Reading your poems. And hopefully they will never come to end.

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September 15, 2010
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This is a very good poem. Just try to watch a few things like: then she saw glanced, You only need one of those, either saw or glanced.

Keep up the good work, this poem was very cute

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September 15, 2010
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Nice one! Speaks of love at first sight! You're a dreamer and your dream is cool!

Keep writing bro as you always are able to bring a smile on everyone's face from your poems

-Deviant Writer-

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September 15, 2010
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Pretty sweet...

like love at first dance... lol...

very romantic...

nice write...

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