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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: September 10, 2010 at 11:38 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Sad | Romance | Love
Upload Stats: 4.66 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 400 views

Battle scars  

The wounds are beginning to heal, inside my poetic body.

My scars are a slowing process, to see the sacrifice I put on the line.

Every single day and night, I give my best friends a tribute.

My tributes come straight from my heart, my sweat and my own blood.

I spend countless years, to quit now to see what holds of my future.

To see the brilliance of thunderstorm, or the king of tributes.

It doesn’t matter who I am, still awesome I am like my 2 idols.

Shagrath the lead singer from dimmu borgir, the undertaker wrestlemania’s phenom and now I am here to see my mission.

To see the legends of great, awesomeness destiny achievement.

I love to see my friends, greatest achievement I want them accomplish their goals.

I wait till I see my own goal, but inside of my palm of my own hand.

I draw a heart in my hand, I got Respect and honesty and Love.

I cried if my heart failed, if I go into a coma I know I am not alone.

To see the spirits of my own friends, they will never loose the king of tributes.

As long I breathe in to see the world, I have a heart a poetry heart.

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September 11, 2010
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heartfelt... very well penned thunder and every word truly comes from the heart...

you will always be the king of tributes and you will always be in our hearts...

Lots of love here...



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September 11, 2010
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Good job. very true.

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September 10, 2010
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To the tribute king, a tribute from a newbie. The love shown to you is an inspiration. Please don't ever stop writing.

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