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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: September 09, 2010 at 03:54 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Love | Fantasy
Upload Stats: 2 comments and 224 views

Love journal 3

I droved the warrior’s train I drove it and I continued on.

Soon as I reach the station, my second in command which was the firemen.

I press on to the poetry of the realm, or the heavens that is poetry forever.

To see the sacrifice of the warrior’s train, as I see the sun setting.

To see the warrior train chugging and chugging, I shovel coal in my train’s firebox.

To see the main station up ahead, the station of all best friends.

© ThunderStorm - all rights reserved

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Comments & Reviews ( X 3)

September 10, 2010
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i like it. its very intresting. it kinda doesnt make sense in a way but it has this feeling or message its sending good job!!!

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September 09, 2010
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woooohoooooo more love journal oh yeah this is so good dang bro keep it up i wonder what is soon to come

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