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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: September 06, 2010 at 02:38 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Sad | Love | Spiritual
Upload Stats: 4.7 Stars by 5 users with 5 comments and 338 views

My Favorite Tree  

It was storming and thundering; at 8:30 I watch the storm from my window I was scared only a little.

But when the lighting cracks my window it shattered glass everywhere, then the lighting was intense.

It was a very painful experience, to see my favorite tree crashed down I climbed on that tree when I was 5 years old.

And now I won’t get to see it again, to see it engulfed in flames I was crying my eyes out.

My favorite tree was an acorn tree; I had so much fun with it I climb to the very top of my favorite tree.

It hurts me inside deeply to loose a brother to me, I added a tire swing on my acorn tree.

I swing and I swing till I get very dizzy, then I rest under a shady spot under my tree.

I love you Aaron acorn Storm

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September 10, 2010
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Hey Storm...losing anything that's precious memories is hurtful and not always easy to forget especially if they are good'll find another, maybe when you have children which will bring these memories flooding back...your friend Silver Wings...

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September 06, 2010
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awe baby this was so sad I am so sorry you lost your favorite tree and you did so well with putting your emotions in this , made me almost cry from your pain , awesome again babe , I loved that you shared such a sad memory with us , thank you son ,

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September 06, 2010
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WOW I dunno when I read such a unique piece. This was a memory and you shared it deeply. Awesome write. Thank you so very much.
Yours Kassie

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September 06, 2010
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This seems more like a journal entry then a poem to me honestly. The experience and emotions were described well.

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September 06, 2010
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We all had a favourite tree! Mine was an apple tree that I helped my Grandaddy plant when I was a toddler. I will never forget that. I would hate to see it crash down like that though like a stormy weather sending bolts of crackling electricity to the ground. Man! Cool that you had a swing though and a shady spot. Good story sad ending.

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