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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: September 03, 2010 at 05:36 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Love | Relationships
Upload Stats: 4.25 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 231 views

Heart is where the Love Is  

Flowers are the greatest, gift for a beautiful attractive lady.

Or you like to do something nice for a lady, buy her a box of chocolates.

Girls go wild for a man in a Tuxedo, to ask politely for a quite charming evening.

To see a beautiful charming lady, in a loveable cute red dress.

Then once the both of you, know each or an awhile bend down on 1 knee.

To see a beautiful ring from a gentleman, it is a loving and touching moment.

After all a lady will be in tears, to see a marvelous ring.

Then show your girl to your family members, and including your siblings.

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September 03, 2010
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So Sweet
My dear friend TS. . . this is so sweet. I looooovvvvveeee getting flowers and candy. Will you tell my hubby? hahaha. This is charming. And. . . I love the title too. Peace ! ee

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September 03, 2010
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"Flowers are the greatest (why comma?) gift for"...

"Or [If?] you like to do something nice"

The wording here seem a tad bit old fashion and thus not to appealing to me. It seems to describe a dream girl the writer wishes to meet to have a "happy ending". Interesting write. ~Shea

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