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locked forever



Author: MichelleR
Created: September 03, 2010 at 12:51 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Love | Sad | Despair
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 3 users with 4 comments 210 views

locked forever 
you are missing from me
but in my eyes i could not see
that you are never to far away from me
in my heart you'll always be

every tear that falls from my eyes
it is hard but i am gonna try
you wouldn't want me to be this way
so in my heart you will always stay

all your memories surround me
every day is like a reminder
don't take things granted
because someday you will see

the times we had together were fun
but now there all over and done
i locked my heart up and gave you the key
and now they have taken you away from me

i learn to move on day after day
and i will never forget what you were to me
but as the pain starts to ease away
my broken heart will never be free

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Comments & Reviews

elfqueena
September 03, 2010

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awe
This was so sad and touching , loved the emotions i felt from this , was very well told . thank you for sharing

elfqueena
September 03, 2010
ouch so sorry meant to put applause on this but my mouse didnt click right , so sorry babe

MichelleR
September 03, 2010
(Creator)
thanks so much for the feed back ! i dont care about the applause ...as long as you liked it its all good

elfqueena
September 03, 2010
yes I loved it was very good babe. elf



eliza
September 03, 2010

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simply lovely
this is just an amazing little piece of work ...love it ..eliza keating

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SEPHIROTH
September 03, 2010

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I LIKE

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Lindsey15
September 03, 2010

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Beautiful
This is beautiful,and it touched my heart. It made me FEEL what you were writing.Good job. A ten overall

MichelleR
September 03, 2010
(Creator)
thank you so much! i am glade you like it






      

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