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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: August 29, 2010 at 11:48 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Fantasy | Spiritual | Free Verse
Upload Stats: 4.59 Stars by 5 users with 6 comments and 304 views


In my darkest days, to see a moon lit sky in the clouds of the world.

To see a wolf spirit, inside the clouds it channels the spirits.

Inside your very own heart, it has the honor and love of the beauty.

Sometimes if you want to be alone, if you are sad or in tears.

Donít be a quitter look inside your heart, your heart will tell you.

Donít fail you are a winner, not a loser you got to fulfilled your destiny.

Or your prophecy is reaching out, for you to climb to the very highest mountain.

The mountain is calling your name, to see your true destiny.

You are not afraid of heights; it is all just reality in your mind.

© ThunderStorm - all rights reserved

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August 31, 2010
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Oh dear one this was so awesome i almost cried from it your so sweet and kind to care for others and try and give them hope and comfort your a blessing to have as a friend and a son , you make me proud to be your poetic mom and would be very proud if my own son , you are amazing dearheart loved this was so beautiful . you deserve the spotlight for this one as you do for your other works blessing on you son ,

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August 30, 2010
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Very inspiring, the whole poem is good, but the last two lines really stick out.

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August 29, 2010
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Thunder, your work is always so inspiring. From tributes through to inspirational pieces. Your writing always inspires others.

Thank you for being on this site Thunder.


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August 29, 2010
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I really needed this
Thank you My Friend Thunderstorm. . . you have no idea how much I needed to hear these words today. The mountain is calling my name. . . really well done! peace! ee

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August 29, 2010
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another great poem ,thunder keep writing

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August 29, 2010
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This is a great poems for those who have lost their faith to press on in the world. Look into yourself and find determination. I like it a lot! Great job I kinda didn't want it to end, keep it up!

thank you so much i might write more soon

 ThunderStorm replied on August 29, 2010


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