August 21, 2010 at 11:01 am
Poem, G (All)
Fantasy | Love | Friendship
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I walked on the poetry beach, looking at the sunís rays surfing on the mighty waves.
Seeing me surfing with a wave, so big I almost wipeout on my surfboard.
But I got back up and seeing the wave, laughing at me so I got back on my surfboard.
Then before I knew it, I was surfing on the mighty wave of all then standing in the sand.
I see all of my best friends, they was standing in the middle of the sand dunes.
So after a brutal 4 Ĺ hours surfing, on the biggest wave even I teach them how to surf.
Then after that I wipeout right on the sand, I rolled over gazing at the sunrays.
So after seeing the mighty wave, crashed down to a low wave.
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