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think


Author: MichelleR
Created: August 12, 2010 at 08:09 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Relationships | Free Verse | Personal
Entry Stats: 4.83 Stars by 3 users with 4 comments 151 views
think 
The things you say
The thoughts you think
You don't think i know them
What you say to my face
Is different from what you don't
And you really think i don't feel it
Well say what you want
I cant change how you think
But you should think before you say
Because it sometimes applies to yourself

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LordHuggington
August 17, 2010

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Not bad
a little vague though. Its hard to relate or feel the emotion when I dont know what his thoughts and thinkings are. Its like yall could be arguing about pizza for all i know
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gareth
August 13, 2010

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i enjoyed this short but sweet very well written
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-Seo-
August 13, 2010

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Good
Well its simple/direct. Not very FUN in the allusive sense, but nice

Although it could use punctuation! The first few lines- I didnt know the beginnings or the end. Commas and periods, love, commas and periods xD


-Matt
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lorenzobright
August 12, 2010

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:))))))
This is soo true, espcially with me going to high school. keep up the good work and keep telling the truth through your writing! you're awesome and check out mah writing if you would like to do so. thanks!
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MichelleR
August 12, 2010
(Creator) 		thanks so much! and yeah .im going through high school as well ...so i know lol .and sure! ill be happy to check out your writing. ill leave some comments






      

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