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Destiny and Reality


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: August 06, 2010 at 10:45 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Fantasy | Love | Friendship
Entry Stats: 4.68 Stars by 11 users with 11 comments 262 views

Destiny and Reality 
When I look inside my heart, it feels like a guardian angel is looking after me.

It feels like my angel is making my own bed, listening to my tunes before the night settles.

It warms my heart with good awesome, wholesome fun for my poetic Brothers in Arms.

My poetic Sisters of the wind, you ride where the wind will guide you in the right direction.

We are part of the elite writers in history, of this organization We Love poetry to Death.

We are good handsome and beautiful poets; we treat each with love and Hope.

Here is my pledge of poetry.

I thunderstorm has the Courage, and Honor and Love and Hope.

To show the true loyal of Respect, for otherís Creative choices.

I follow my own heart and my true Destiny, to see Destiny in the Eye.

I see Destiny before it is marvelous, sight and Now Reality is calling me.



Author Notes
To my Brothers in arms and my sisters We Live on To see the outside world


 

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Comments & Reviews ( X 9)

Tjejma
August 22, 2010

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magnificent its abundance of emotion and splendid with its way of expressing the exakt feeling. Could never had enjoyed your poetry more.

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Guiritano
August 15, 2010

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Elaborate
There is no visual scheme to this poem. I can feel the passion coming from you however so well done on that at least.

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DeviantWriter88
August 10, 2010

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Yes! We do and I enjoy it to utmost Brother! I loved your poem spoke sincerity and showed your passion for poetry and your charm from which you mesmerize us all!

Keep up the Charm!

-Deviant Writer-

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inspirehope
August 10, 2010

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Excellent
Beautiful and simply delightful..... Great piece of work, I love every line!
May the Lord bless and sustain you! Keep on writing, and thank you for
sharing and caring Thunder Storm!


Much Love,
Inspire Hope

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elfqueena
August 09, 2010

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oh so sweet
awe Thunder this was so awesome and to take and poetry pledge was just awesomely done my dear son , you wrote this so beautifuly and so sweet and soft it was everyone has to love this . was simply amazing dear heart very good job, poetic mom

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garyhamlow
August 09, 2010

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Excellent
An excellent piece here Thunder. Excellent poetry is a delight to read, but sadly seems to be lacking nowadays. True poetry comes from the heart.

Keep up the good work.

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Kassandra
August 08, 2010

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Kool
A poetry pledge. I too Good writing here Storm and more should read this and take its message. Well done young brother this is a lovely piece,

Yours Kassie

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mileycyruslover
August 07, 2010

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Sweet!!
Wow!! That was just down right amazing!! Keep it up!!

Peace, Love, & Happiness,

miles

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rabiakhan
August 07, 2010

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i loved it thunderstorm! it was great

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MagicMJ
August 07, 2010

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Beautiful
wow... well penned thunder...

a very good poem indeed...

and yes follow your heart and your destiny...

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tkme4grntd
August 07, 2010

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good
this is a good poem. i like it and only ask that you keep this pledge and give us more writings to enjoy. thank you

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