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Poetic mom's blanket


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: July 31, 2010 at 11:38 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Romance | Love | Spiritual
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments 175 views

Poetic mom's blanket 
As I sewing a special blanket for my poetic mom, it has roses and angels on it are going be the best blanket.

I continued to make sure it is the best; she has ever set her own 2 eyes on the home made blanket.

When the day came I gave her a hug, she was so happy to see me then while she is watching TV.

I am almost done with the homemade blanket; so I folded it nice and gently then wrap it as present.

When I got back with my poetic momís present, I surprised her she was so amazed.

Then she saw the Roses and the angels, she was crying till she saw it she got down on 1 knee.

She was crying a little she hugged me, and then she gave me her car keys to open her car.


Then I gasped she made me a blanket; it has skulls and stars on it I was crying too.

I gave her a kiss on the cheek; she asked me if I could make another homemade blanket.

To my poetic mom I love you


Author Notes
To my angel elfqueena


 

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Comments & Reviews ( X 3)

elfqueena
August 02, 2010

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awe
awe I am so in awe baby you surprise me over and over again and again, now I am truly crying . such a sweet and loving poem and it is so wonderful . wish I could sew I would make that blanket for you just the way you described it . I am at a loss for words dear one , you are the son of my heart . you make me feel so special . Love you so much for your sweetness and your heart . thank you so much dearheart .your poetic mama loves you tons and tons . Magic is right I am so bless. awe so very very blessed sweet one love you, Sharon

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GABSTBOZ
July 31, 2010

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hi Thunder
The comfort of blankets that cover with love, a poem of words that cover with love and keeps this reader warm. A cozy read Bro.

Be Blanketed in Smiles my friend
Gabor

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MagicMJ
July 31, 2010

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this is so touching...
the words were very candid and as if I was seeing it happen...
So sweet of you...

Elf is very blessed with a lot people loving her... She's truly special...)

keep writing!

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