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Poetic brother and poetic sister


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: July 27, 2010 at 05:47 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Romance | Love | Spiritual
Entry Stats: 4.75 Stars by 6 users with 6 comments 205 views

Poetic brother and poetic sister 
It feels everything hopeless but I am not alone, I have my sweet poetic sister kassie.

She is very thoughtful loyal, she always watch after her poetic Brother Thunderstorm.

She is so sweet and lovely; she has a special place in her heart, which is her poetic brother.

Even I have a special place in my heart, which is my loveable sweet poetic sister.

She likes to joke around everyone loves me and my poetic sister kassie,

She is so gifted even I am gifted and respected and loyal, I have a poet heart inside of me.

We are the mighty poet writers and we are gifted untied as one together we rule the poetry universe.

As long we have a heart inside of us we will Respect each other and write good reviews.

Give an honest Review we love each other Even in death I love everyone here at writers-network.

Even my poetic sister kassie.


This is the king of tributes and poetry saying I love ya guys and gals.

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Comments & Reviews ( X 6)

Kassandra
August 03, 2010

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Wow
You made this so special Storm and like Dominic said you always come from a very positive place with your writing this highlights how very special you are and your attitude is beautiful. Thank you for sharing this piece and for my part I am blown away

Yours Kassie

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GABSTBOZ
July 31, 2010

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Hi Thunder
Poets in arms, armed with love from the heart, loyalty is a beautiful thing.

Smiles
gabs

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Dom1n1ck
July 28, 2010

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Indeed
Nice work Thunder, I liek that you always come from a positive place with your writings. It is uplifting for us all. This is no exception, nice work. D

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poeticlady
July 28, 2010

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nice
nice write.. held my attention.. please keep writing.. u are talented...

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elfqueena
July 27, 2010

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awe sighing
awe so sweet babe and everyone loves bothof you too dearone . thats my new name for you DEAR ONE . AS YOU ARE VERY DEAR TO US ALL ME ESPICALLY . LOVE THIS POEM AS I AM SURE KASS DOES TOO. VERY GOOD JOB BABY . VERY GOOD

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ErikTyni
July 27, 2010

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Goood!!
This is really good, it flows naturally and the rythm is good, as well as your choice of words!
I really do like how you structured this one!
good job mate!
my favourite part is
"She is so gifted even I am gifted and respected and loyal, I have a poet heart inside of me. " it's so nice and sweet, and polite at the same time =)
good job mate!

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