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Mom's Vision

Author: ThunderStorm

Created: July 19, 2010 at 06:40 pm

Entry Type: Poem, G (All)

Category: Romance | Love | Spiritual

Entry Stats: 4.85 Stars by 7 users with 7 comments 148 views

Mom's Vision

Mom’s vision

You brought me in the world.

You teach me to walk while I was a baby.

Mom’s vision

You saw me riding my first bicycle.

You saw me beat on the pots and pans like a rockstar.

Mom’s vision

I wore your shoes it was a little too big.

Then you saw me Graduated from 12th grade diploma in my hand.

Mom’s vision

You were crying when you saw me shaking hands with my old teacher.

You are the best mom in the world of god’s green earth.

Mom’s vision

To my mom and my poetic mom

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GABSTBOZ
July 31, 2010

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Hi Thunder
Very sweet thoughts, written down well to show great caring and respect,.I remember playing the pots and pans too, and I used the wooden spoons as drum sticks. thanks for sharing your love.

Smiles
Gabs

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poeticlady
July 25, 2010

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awesome

this is a lovely tribute.. nice read, nice write...keep it up

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Hannah92
July 25, 2010

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Beautiful

You just captured the whole bond between mother and child....in these relatively short lines.....excellent....truly talented.....i loved it....it creates a deep well of emotions....that you just cant stop from falling into.....great write.....

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elfqueena
July 24, 2010

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now crying

awe baby , you are so sweet , and so sorry have been gone fromhere . will try and be on more . this poem just touched my heart so your such a sweet son ,and bet your real mom thanks so too. I know I have tears in my eyes am so touched by your love . good write baby

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SparkleSmile
July 20, 2010

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Wow!

Good job. This is a great tribute to your mom. You wrote this really well, as always. I'm sure your mom loves it!

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kristalove96
July 20, 2010

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Aww, this is so sweet. I love it, cause this is probably how every mom feels and what every mom sees. Well done TS!!

-Krista

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garyhamlow
July 19, 2010

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Excellent

This is an excellent heartfelt piece of writing. Your writing is always about others, never selfishly about yourself. You continue to dedicate to work to others always. Shows the value of a person like yourself.

Gary

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