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Hawaiian pulse
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Author:
ThunderStorm
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| Created: July 16, 2010 at 05:27 pm |
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Entry Type:
Poem, G (All)
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| Category: Romance | Love | Love |
| Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments 146 views |
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Hawaiian pulse 
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In the beautiful red-orange sunset, enjoying to see the fire dancers dance with fire.
Enjoying a Hawaiian drink, and enjoying a luau.
Having a romantic Hawaiian dinner, to see the sun goes down fill in the nighttime sky.
To see the peaceful stars fill with moonlight, of the midnight hours.
Sometimes if you feel to get down on 1 knee, and asking the girl next to you.
Extending your hand in marriage, to see a girl crying in tears to see a wedding ring.
She seems quite please, with your amazing talents having a famous Hawaiian wedding.
Writing a Hawaiian theme poem, no matter what happens you are the right one.
When I extend my hand, to share the love and the beautiful.
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Author Notes
My 500th poem
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but it was a beautiful poem Thunder!!!!