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A Poem by ThunderStorm


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: July 16, 2010 at 05:27 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Love | Love
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments and 185 views

Hawaiian pulse  

In the beautiful red-orange sunset, enjoying to see the fire dancers dance with fire.

Enjoying a Hawaiian drink, and enjoying a luau.

Having a romantic Hawaiian dinner, to see the sun goes down fill in the nighttime sky.

To see the peaceful stars fill with moonlight, of the midnight hours.

Sometimes if you feel to get down on 1 knee, and asking the girl next to you.

Extending your hand in marriage, to see a girl crying in tears to see a wedding ring.

She seems quite please, with your amazing talents having a famous Hawaiian wedding.

Writing a Hawaiian theme poem, no matter what happens you are the right one.

When I extend my hand, to share the love and the beautiful.


© ThunderStorm - all rights reserved

Author Notes


My 500th poem


 
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Comments & Reviews



GABSTBOZ
July 31, 2010
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hehehe I remember you emailing this to me Thunder. "Hawaiian Pulse" is a special poem. I hope one day to go visit Hawaii and join in on a luau with my beautiful gal.
" To see the peaceful stars fill with moonlight, of the midnight hours. "

Smiles
gabs


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hotbreeze987
July 20, 2010
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This was beautiful Thunder(:
Now I wish I could see the sunset right now, but it's pitch black outside...
Amazing like all of them!
-Brianna


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SparkleSmile
July 17, 2010
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Good Job!
Wow! This is really good. Good job


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JoanDZombie
July 16, 2010
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wow Thunder!!! your 500th one???? i only have 115... we should have celebrated that
but it was a beautiful poem Thunder!!!!
Your
Friend
Joan


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