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Angel's light

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: July 10, 2010 at 10:24 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Romance | Love | Spiritual
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments 155 views
Angel's light 
I see the light of the angel’s light, they play the beautiful music I ever seen.

They soothe the bright sun to be a polite sun, for these special angels.

They often play the golden harp, of beautiful and softly peacefully.

As I see my guardian angel watching over me, she played my favorite song.

The song was called if I close my eyes forever, it warm my heart with a sad feeling.

But since then I have seeking the true light, after the bright sun of the world.

To see the inner future, I am not even afraid to stare at the bright sun.

Sometimes once you made up for your sins, then you will find out where you go.

There is certain things for the world of angels, make sure do not anger you.

You need angels to guide, to see inside and out.

To my sweet guardian angel ElfQueena this poem is for you

P.S. please watch over me like you did for your son.

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Comments & Reviews ( X 8)

Tjejma
August 21, 2010

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Your poetry has really gotten to me in a good way, imagine. *smiles*
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elfqueena
August 02, 2010

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man I am crying
Oh my sweet angel you have made me so proud that I can call you son,this was so awesome and i feel so bad as I missed this one this long . you are my special angel you know that and will always watch over you as you are to me like my own . love you sweet babe . thank you so much my darlin son . Breeze is right I love this poem and all your others too , baby of my heart . God bless and watch over you dear heart always
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hotbreeze987
July 12, 2010

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Amazing(:
Thunder this is very beautiful, like most of your work is.
You see things differently from most people, and that is so awesome.
I like to think angels are watching down and looking out for me(:
Your poems sure do make me happy,

-Brianna
p.s, I missed you too(:
And I'm sure that ElfQuenna is going to absolutely love this.
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ThunderStorm
July 16, 2010
(Creator) 		thanks brianna you are so amazing you are so clever lol



apple17
July 11, 2010

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My friend that was very beautiful. I LOVE IT. I like it how you dedicate this poem to ElfQueena. We all have angels that are watching over us and can help us through out our way. Many can relate to this kind of poem. The message to it is that an angel is out to watch over you. The line that blew me away is " Sometimes once you made up for your sins, then you will find out where you go" Very wonderful. I got to give you two thumbs up. terrific writing piece and keep it up
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ThunderStorm
July 11, 2010
(Creator) 		thanks so much for reviewing this wonderful piece i bet elfqueena will love it. and as be the first one to review it you will get a poem about your self sounds a cool idea to you let me know or you can p-m me!!!




      

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