July 06, 2010 at 09:54 pm
Poem, T (13+)
Dark | Horror | Death
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Gothic Thorns part 2
As I walk to the valley of darkness, I begin to loose memory losses.
The vultures are circling around, like I am a piece of meat.
As I see the vultures raking my eyes, I see a man.
Dowsing my head with water, he took me in his home.
I feel welcome by a mere immortal, I was gasping for air in my lungs.
But then all suddenly, I can breathe inside deep underground.
As I see hooded figures, with torches they welcome with a sight.
Then Finally I see him the shadow figure, he saw my scars and wounds.
It was all cover in blood and needles, as I laid flat on my stomach he starts picking the needles from my back.
Then as I begin to heal my wounds, as I see short-term loss for blood.
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