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Smooth Criminal



Author: MagicMJ
Created: June 22, 2010 at 11:32 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Tribute | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.62 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments 189 views

Smooth Criminal 
Slick moves
Gliding smoothly
On the floor
Caught in a trance,
Mesmerized, hypnotized
With his body
Defying gravity
No doubt, don't try
To think twice
You've been struck
By the smooth criminal
The killer on the dance floor

As the lights caught
The movements
On the stage
Eyes popped out
Screams shook the place
Ecstasy is the name
Of the play
Spinning on that floor
Took the life out
Of the souls
Willing to jump off
Of the edge of great thrill
No doubt, don't try
To think twice
You've been hit
By the smooth criminal
The killer on the dance floor

Killing, thrilling, heating
On that floor
Spinning, leaning, tipping
On that toes
Sliding, moving, gliding
On that gloss
He's the man, no other can
Moonwalk
Like the Smooth Criminal
Of the dance floor


Author Notes
Pardon me...
But I'll be posting tribute poems for MJ...
remembering him on his death...
Just like to share...


 

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Comments & Reviews ( X 1)

truemusician
June 24, 2010

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Great!
This is, once again, a great tribute to Michael Jackson. Very well done.

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sean89
June 22, 2010

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Awesome
I love Michael Jackson and this is a great tribute to him using some lines from his own song and corresponding it in to your own original idea. Great job!

MagicMJ
June 24, 2010
(Creator)
thanks a lot!! glad to hear you love MJ too...



elfqueena
June 22, 2010

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awe
well another sweet tribute to micheal, very sweet and so true was an excellent dancer as well as singer , need a few adjustments as in on that toes should be on his toes. would make more sense lol but like this anyways good tribute ,

MagicMJ
June 24, 2010
(Creator)
Thanks a lot elfqueena...
really glad you liked it...
and thanks for the suggestion...

MagicMJ

elfqueena
June 24, 2010
your very welcome I am glad you liked my suggestion Elf



Galacticbeam
June 22, 2010

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very good
A great tribute and memoriam to your dear friend. Like to read more if you get the chance. Thanks for sharing

MagicMJ
June 24, 2010
(Creator)
Thanks a lot! I really appreciate it...)






      

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