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A Poem by MagicMJ



Author: MagicMJ
Created: June 22, 2010 at 11:32 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Tribute | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.62 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments and 201 views

Smooth Criminal  

Slick moves
Gliding smoothly
On the floor
Caught in a trance,
Mesmerized, hypnotized
With his body
Defying gravity
No doubt, don't try
To think twice
You've been struck
By the smooth criminal
The killer on the dance floor

As the lights caught
The movements
On the stage
Eyes popped out
Screams shook the place
Ecstasy is the name
Of the play
Spinning on that floor
Took the life out
Of the souls
Willing to jump off
Of the edge of great thrill
No doubt, don't try
To think twice
You've been hit
By the smooth criminal
The killer on the dance floor

Killing, thrilling, heating
On that floor
Spinning, leaning, tipping
On that toes
Sliding, moving, gliding
On that gloss
He's the man, no other can
Moonwalk
Like the Smooth Criminal
Of the dance floor


© MagicMJ - all rights reserved

Author Notes


Pardon me...
But I'll be posting tribute poems for MJ...
remembering him on his death...
Just like to share...


 
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Comments & Reviews ( X 1)



truemusician
June 24, 2010
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Great!
This is, once again, a great tribute to Michael Jackson. Very well done.


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sean89
June 22, 2010
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Awesome
I love Michael Jackson and this is a great tribute to him using some lines from his own song and corresponding it in to your own original idea. Great job!



(Author)
thanks a lot!! glad to hear you love MJ too...

 MagicMJ replied on June 24, 2010




elfqueena
June 22, 2010
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awe
well another sweet tribute to micheal, very sweet and so true was an excellent dancer as well as singer , need a few adjustments as in on that toes should be on his toes. would make more sense lol but like this anyways good tribute ,



(Author)
Thanks a lot elfqueena...
really glad you liked it...
and thanks for the suggestion...

MagicMJ

 MagicMJ replied on June 24, 2010


your very welcome I am glad you liked my suggestion Elf

 elfqueena replied on June 24, 2010




Galacticbeam
June 22, 2010
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very good
A great tribute and memoriam to your dear friend. Like to read more if you get the chance. Thanks for sharing



(Author)
Thanks a lot! I really appreciate it...)

 MagicMJ replied on June 24, 2010






      

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